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As if We weren't Loud Enough

As much as beauty tries to make itself present,
it fails every time, except in you.
When you wake up,
do you realize what you do for me everyday?
I wish there was a way to read a heart,
I wish I could read it to you.
However, this is the closest I can come.
As I hold you,
and listen to your serenade of breathes,
do you see how I react?
And for the days to come,
if you can promise me love,
if you can promise me trust,
and you can promise me more of a life
than I could have ever expected
then I think we'll be okay.
I'll always look into your eyes,
to try and read your heart,
and to give you a glimpse of mine.

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  • The Poetic Prince
    November 1, 2008

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    Great

    A touching poem about love. You've done it again man, everything you write is just so good. Your poems communicate such great feeling, and emoition. I can't wait to read your next one.