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Waiting

Bursting  skies
waves crashing
Birds swaying
      Her hand against her heart
Praying for it fall apart
      Her body exposed
Awaiting for her seamen by the lonely shore

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Photo by Melanie Masuth aka Vampirella87 at www.deviantart.com
Picture Credit: http://vampirella87.deviantart.com/art/Dive-into-the-Water-57423213

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  • piccola silver member
    November 2, 2008

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    I have a picture that would make a perfect background or even just a graphic for this write! Anyway thank you for entering and here's one more comment lol


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    October 19, 2008

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    Romantically touching; how sad she must be lonely waiting for him to return

    Beautifully penned
    ♥
    Thank You & Best of Luck
    Stay safe
    ~Manda