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Heaven's Lagoon, made for Brandy.

Laying upon a fleece so soft and white.
Upon those slow drifting clouds at night.

A warm embrace of a loved one once lost.
tears once frozen, will now at long last defrost.

Emotions mixed as time keeps Pace
music beats in the heart like a base.

Looking down with those loving eyes,
And always finding yourself full of pride.

Knowing deep inside that hope remains,
We can now release your earth bound chains.

For one day, not to soon,
we will all meet again in Heavens Lagoon.

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  • Little Blue Bird
    November 19, 2008

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    Beautiful, my love

    Very touching poem. Blitz, You are a good writer stop being your worst critic. Beautiful way to remember your friend, she is always with you in your heart.


  • Little Fawn
    October 7, 2008
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    Wow so deep I am sorry about brandy but she is with you always at heart. I am here for you


  • Handcuffs of Love
    October 6, 2008
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    Wow! This is very good!! You said you weren't any good,liar!! Very strong emotion. I loved it!!