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To A Young Man Or Woman Going Off To War.


 

 

 

"Godspeed And Return To Sender Please!"

Please always remember to............
Grow eyes in the back of your head,
take notice of all the things around you,
things that before you might have simply ignored.


Develop a three mile stare.  
Sharpen your hearing,
turn down those headphones for a while,
listen harder for small sounds.


Go out late at night and just study
all the motion and the rustles around you,
make sure you get your hearing checked thoroughly.


Practice being quiet,
walk on gravel, sand, branches, twigs,
and then strive to transmit the most
minimal amount of sound possible.


Use your sense of smell to try detecting
any approaching odors before you see them.
Use saline drops to keep your nostrils clear.


Use your common sense,
from now till when you leave for any war zone.
Be aware of all that goes on around you.
Watch your back, your sides and your front,
as if you were in a pit of rattlesnakes,
because you will be.


Get on the right track with God,
he is your best ally and his name
as well as your Mom's will be
the two names you will call on the most....
and the last one many have called upon.


Strengthen your endurance,
run till you can't run anymore,
and then run some more,
hold your breath until

you can't hold it anymore,
and then hold it again.


Learn to swim without arms,
using just your legs, and vice versa.


Build up your muscles to their top potential
so that they are always there for you.


Expect the unexpected,
have your friends try to sneak up on you
and then catch them in the act.


Clear your head of all problems
and commitments back home,
so many have been felled
after some trouble stateside

distracted them.


Lose all of your vices,
a cigarette being lit
has killed more men in battle

then bullets sometimes,
Alcohol has no place there, and drugs
are the enemy’s best defense.


Go in bravely, fight hard
and be confident that you can win,
using all the tools above,
and some of your own from your soul.


Never be afraid or reluctant to kill,
or you will be killed.
You can be merciful in killing,
make it quick, clean,

and as painless as possible.


For killing leaves scars
that you must carry all your life,
let them be merciful scars
that were wrought for just causes.


Wear your body armor always,
your safety belts, helmets,

tethers and life jackets,
no matter how hot it gets,
no matter what the circumstances.


you would not believe how many men
have drowned in that stupid desert.


Pray often and sincerely
for God hears a warrior’s prayers
and if it's in his will he answers,
and if it's not then you will receive
a glorious award for your sacrifices...
not here on earth, but in heaven.


Make no rash decisions,
proceed slowly, trust your instincts,
and we will see you

when your tour is through,
A changed person,

but a true survivor and a patriot.


There are many

heroes in my book
but mostly dead ones,
those who risked it all

to save others.


You don't have to

be a hero, just be.
Peace to you and yours.
My hopes and prayers

go with you....

my flesh would too but I

am a retired warrior.


Godspeed to you,
and a Teflon coat of love,
to wrap around you,
so that no pain

nor sorrow ever sticks
beyond the moments it is dealt.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Artis

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  • petalblue2
    October 12, 2008

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    You have caused me to cry. You have opened up a world to me that I would never know without this solemn and life-saving advice. This poem is a triumph, it holds emotion, courage, motivation and practicality! Truly wonderful, congrats on the gold!


  • Darkwell
    October 10, 2008

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    Amazing poem and its like the teachers edition im gonna put it on my wall and learn from it. Just WOW, congratulations!


  • emc2
    October 7, 2008

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    I love your poem. It is written beautifully. I love the way you phrase the advise and tell them different tactics to hopefully help them along their way. Excellent job. We thank all soldiers who go and fight for our freedom and their sacrafices are never in vain.


  • Symphony
    October 7, 2008

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    I will be honest...

    I stopped reading a little less than half way through; it was simply too long to hold my interest. This is not saying that you did not write it well, or that anything was wrong with it as such, but for me, perhaps I am too far away from war matters to find this self involving. However what I read of it, I thought was intelligent, and well constructed. Also, loved the collage at the top ; heartbreaking!


    • artis
      October 7, 2008

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      If you were bound for some cruel war with the IRA or some other such venue of military might, this would become your manual....your womanual which you would study and memorize regardless of its length, so that you could possibly survive the length of the

      facing such a consequence in the spring of your 22 years, of wondrous life, I can understand your need to abandon it's message. Sadly though it applies even to young girls in this world who walk the streets alone at night, or are caught unaware in a situation, that they cannot control. basic survival instincts should be taught in school, in a gym class, individual combat training would benenfit the innocent, and deprive the predators of this planet quite often. Thanks for your comments~~~Artis

      • Symphony
        October 7, 2008
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        I couldn't agree more that basic survival instincts should be taught; or even basic self defences courses made compulsory. I live in England, quite the other side of the world to America, and since moving here from my homeland of Ireland, have wished deeply that I knew some self defence - on any night that I might be walking home alone. It's a sobering thought indeed that it applies to the world and not just military, and I agree with you. An eye opener for me to be sure


  • storiesuntold gold member
    October 6, 2008

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    Excellent write and so true

    You have and most young men will find their way to become the senses which makes up his very soul to survive indeed . May I add this poem link to my front page with the rest for our soldiers men and women in uniform and for their families

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