Elsa's Gentle Hands
Written on Oct 21 2005
Blisters haunt me
feet scathing against black
upon a summer's day of June
with my brother on my back
Shoeless we wandered
trying to find our way home
after escaping the horror
of our father, leaving us alone
He took our shoes away
so we wouldn't dare to leave
and the shirts from our backs
as he sat smoking his weed
We ran, as he slept
too young to be on our own
but we knew mom would find us
if we could get to a phone
So upon my back I carried him
toe headed, only three
as I cried upon the asphalt
while it scorched tender feet
A wrinkled hand touched my mine
and lead us out of the sun
to a porch with a swing
promising to phone our mom
With tears in her eyes, she came
and took us both safely home
but I'll never forget the old lady
that wouldn't leave us alone
Her name was Elsa, she said
and I'm sure God's taken her away
but I'll always remember her
thankful to her for that day
We were gone for so long
beaten, tattered and hungry
scared for our lives and worried
that we'd never find our mommy
But Elsa, dear Elsa
bustled out into the street
wiped my tears and saved us
changing our lives, making it sweet
So to Elsa I say,
wherever you may be
thank you for giving happiness
back to my brother and me
You were our angel, our savior
gentle hands, giving care
and I'll always remember you
answering our prayer
In a list
Comments
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ah, that quick comment thing is ok but it did not show the whole poem i see when i look in normally.
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a good poem, a sad tale of children and parents, the mad weed, it sends people mental i think. a good ending, soft and smiling with caring.


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100th Hoodwink~
OMG You trying to smear my mascara so I have raccoon eyes
this is one Powerful piece and what images to stain the Mind also Spirit~
I noticed it was written back in 2005~ Wow!!
Very Inspiring~ touches deep Beautiful
Love this!!
Bless Elsa's Heart
You have also been Hoodwinked by The Poetic Bandits~ I am a smidge late
Sowwy
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
Best wishes too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~





