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Do You Feel Me Now?

Do You Feel Me Now?
Written on May 01 2004




My fascination for you overwhelms me
though we've never really even spoke
your words fuel my soul and stoke my fires
as I sit in the solitude of my room all alone

I'm reading your newest masterpiece
studying every word and feeling of each line
as I ease back unto my favorite couch
reading your poetry for the millionth time

I think of you all day, dream about you at night
of your face and touch, even how you'd taste
fantasizing how you'd feel and fill me deep inside
as I wrapped around you in passion's embrace

I wonder, do you feel me now, as I start to lose control
imagining my hands are yours against my flesh
warm sensations, making me sigh as they roam
stroking my silken thigh, kneading my aching breast

Bare flesh wiggling against the leather, legs widening
moisture beading between wanton rosebud lips
my finger, your finger, sliding to catch it's drippings
moving slightly higher to stroke my hardened clit

Another hand, moving quickly down between my legs
I'm whimpering as they delve into my walls of lust
sweat glistening over me as my hips start to rock
hard and fast to meet their steadily deepening thrust

Sounds of passion escape, crying your name
back arching as I tense, then tighten and flood
legs quivering, head back, spread wide I lay
sated, yet unfulfilled without the reality of your touch

And I once again wonder...

Do you feel me now?

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  • Wow. Ummmm........felt this one! All I'm saying.....



    ya All-Ways, ~ Jan ~

  • i guess my haiku poetry really does have an effect on people lol - seriously though, a good poem, passionate and soft and sensual, with the power of love delving in between sighs as they escape the page. a good poem.


  • Walking Oxymoron gold member
    October 7, 2008
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    Ooooh, I really like the ending of that.

    Do you feel me now?

    An amazing write..


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    October 7, 2008

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    Very interesting and sensual
    work here. I loved reading this
    one. Well done and thanks a lot
    for sharing it here!




    Jeremy0826