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He Who Is Finer Than A Liquid Sunset

Alike the finest liquid sunset
overlooking a picturesque horizon
so is the soul of he
who speaks beautifully from heart.

Lingering of want
alike bursts of twilight
radiate from within he
who takes the bridge to love in steps of awe.

Scarlet dreams of beauty
alike an enraptured heart
spill forth from within he
who adorns the all of someone with an out reached hand.

Longings of the beautiful
alike heaven and earth colliding
are etched upon the sky
by he, who loves with an entirety.

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  • Princess-nee
    June 1

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    First of all I love the title.It grabbed me to read this one seriously Cravings and longings of a beautiful dream.You captured it well.


  • hamid
    October 23, 2008

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    Nice

    hello dear Rehan!
    how is life and how is your health, i like you poem but can you explain the theme becouse i cant understand the main idea of your poem.
    BE HAPPY!
    Hamid Ali

  • hamid
    October 14, 2008
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    Longings of the beautiful
    alike heaven and earth colliding
    are etched upon the sky
    by he, who loves with an entirety.
    Its really a nice poem but these are the best lines of the poem.
    Good words friend!


  • condor gold member
    October 11, 2008
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    A wonderful poem with a lot to say that is full of love and caring. you inspiration for this obviously is born of a great love for someone. The words used are so wonderful. I love that line 'Scarlet dreams of beauty' That gives me visions beyond what you wrote. An exceptional piece of work. I can see why Soul wanted to put it here. He has a great sense of judgement.

  • PoetryPuppy
    October 7, 2008

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    This is beautiful Mummy, you are a good friend to write this for Rehan, love you Kiarna


  • you make me smile
    October 7, 2008

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    Wow, that's beautiful!! What a good friend you must be to write something so sweet. Truly Inspirational!! We all could do with a little "Soul"

  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    October 7, 2008

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    Thank You For Your Comments On My Poem.

    Thank you for the lovely comments people, I wrote this poem and sent it on to Rehan, who has been a good friend to me, he is always down on himself so I thought an uplifting write would help him be happy again, I thank you again for your much appreciated comments on my poem, Josie


  • HiddenByTheDark
    October 7, 2008

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    This is the most amazing thing you have ever written. It takes my breath away and the imagery I get from this is just stunning.. This is so beautiful and flows great.. I'm so proud of you keep penning

    ♥always Kate


  • blackfang4318 gold member
    October 7, 2008

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    I AM IN SHOCK OF THIS POEM THIS IS THE NEW YOU I LOVE IT. I LOVE THE WAY YOU KEEP THE MOTION OF THE SUNSET IN YOUR HEAD AND THE THOUGHT OF ANOTHER GOING AROUND WITH THE MOTION OF REMOVING WHAT YOU ARE FELLING


  • FreeTara
    October 7, 2008

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    This is very deep and powerful. Your use of language is amazing.
    meaningful and truthful, well done! Loving is powerful when it comes from the heart.

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