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Paradise

Lucy the dreamer is lying on the bed
Is she listening or is she dead?
Laughter coming from behind the shed
Fairies slump humping to the greatful dead

Lucy the dreamer being woke,
Thus, methought; she was dead
Only awakening to be fondled
Til' her breasts turn red

Sound like a great fun time?
You have everything you could need
For not even a dime
And you dont have to wear tweed

Yes! no dress code required
You'll fuck for so long
You'll more than likely get tired
You'll get what you have always desired

Im a PC, bitch and im here to say
You can be straight or you can be gay
Anything is possible when your here...
You can smoke weed and you can chug beer
Just dont grill while your hard or your meat might just sear

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  • MD Masroor
    October 10, 2008

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    This for some reason makes me think of the I'm a PC ad that has been recently made. What's funny, is that they used a Mac book to make those PC ads. The irony of it all ;p I enjoyed this one a lot, humorous in its own way. Keep it up!


  • Deathless1
    October 8, 2008

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    this weird and the fact you wrote it makes it a little funny.
    but still, this is about nothing. no plot, no real ending.
    but randomly pleasant.