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Seasons

 

 

 

Spring


crocus poking up
warm days with softer breezes
mud puddle hopping


Summer


sand between the toes
waves crashing upon the shore
tall lemonade iced



Autumn


leaves gently floating
rustling, crackling, piling high
reds, oranges and golds



Winter


white sparkly crystals
casting a silent blanket
waiting for rebirth

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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border is by Seasons_by_el3sar found in deviant art

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  • Sandygram silver member
    October 14, 2008

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    Lovely Imagery

    Lovely Haikus you have penned. Best of luck sis, Take care. Sandy


  • wingsofgold25 silver member
    October 12, 2008

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    Verry verry good I realy like all four of these.
    They paint a beautiful picture of all four seasons.
    Thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest.
    ED.


  • M0ofi3
    October 7, 2008

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    You're excelling in making backgrounds.

    I also enjoy the haikus. A lot of descriptiveness for such short pieces. Shows a growing ability to say so much with so little.

    One thing: It's a little hard to read the orange against the violet. Maybe a light gray background(?) Don't know...

    Seeya, Sissy-bones!


  • trekkergirl
    October 7, 2008
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    liked the way the border went with the poem. Great job. Good creativity here.

  • goalsv
    October 7, 2008
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    Beautiful poem, really shows the love and feeling of the season.

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