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I see you going

The songs begin to play,
and the words i had planned;
with the summer nights
have slipped away.

So many worlds, colliding,
So many felings
Turning 'round
Full circle;
i see you now.

Your in a different light
and your leading a different life
and i dont know how to feel.

So many times,
You've walked away
with out giving me the chance
to say all i wanted to say.

and the fall comes back,
and your still distant
baby all i do, is make excuses

Cus your busy,
your annoyed
your too stressed
but you avoid me

and the words i had planned;;
slip away
and the only thing left im trying to say
is that i need you,
but your too far gone.


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