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Color Me. Prompt 37.

Color me purple, color me blue,
color me something that shows I'm with you.

On my own I'm a cream, or an awful pale grey,
but with you I'm an even better color every day.

Your touch colors me red, your voice colors me pink,
and inside, I'm colors I can't even think.

You must have lots of crayons, all the colors in the world,
And now all over my soul they're beautifully swirled.

You take parts of you, and paint them right on me,
and then you say I'm the most beautiful girl that you ever did see.

Before I was shy, scared, and insecure
but now that I'm colorful, I'm never unsure.

You took me, and colored me, you made me like this,
you made my life into a very colorful bliss.

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  • JustSimplyLissa gold member
    November 3, 2008

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    I love this, it is so Colorfully written. I love how you've used all sorts of colors to explain how you feel inside with your signficant other. This is really Awesome. Well done! And thank you for this wonderful entry!