He said,
it is what it is
now words echo
on blank pages,
empty boxes
never forgotten memories
seared on hearts,
burnt in time
there are no reasons now,
for an ocean of tears
has ebbed and flowed
waves of tomorrow
gently meet a shore
on different horizons
sands of us have not
been replaced but only
added to while a new
sunrise eclipsed the last
He said,
it is what it is
but will we really know
when it is over
Author notes
"...... said"
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A contest entry
- ".....Said" by DolphinLass.
600 points, ended October 19, 2008, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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A very in depth emotional poem that keeps you intrigued throughout and wondering what 'it' is exactly, , very well worded, thanks for entering
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A poignant piece, wistful and yearning, and very well-written.
Bill
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Beautiful, yet sad and melancholy...
I feel something is missing here, but only time will tell what it is... Great work, your awesome poem really left me pondering about life and love, yeah all that. I'm wishing you the best of luck in this contest!! Take care & keep smiling!! 
Peace Always, Cyn
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this is so sweet!! Wonderful job!! its beautiful and perfect sis!!
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Beautiful and emotional..
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Over before it begins, it happens I guess but dreams are free and I like to dream big C
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