do i say yes?
do i say no?
what do i do?
that is unknown
what will happen with true love?
screaming inside says that dove
can love last?
between me and him?
can we desire the helpless grin?
make love work, is that what you want?
make it happen, in dark font?
desire what you wish
and feel the love
its happiness inside that makes you...
happy,sad,lonely,and mad?
at are these feelings that make you go rad?
do i say yes?
do i say no?
that is the answer i really want to show
love? what is love?
A contest entry
- The joy of love.. by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended October 9, 2008, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Humm..the curiousity is endless when you deal with love..it is hearfelt story you crafted raising the questions in it..and these questions are eternal one..touching thought..well done..
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