Hey.
I've... been meaning to ask you a question.
Do you -
Wait. Never mind.
What I mean to say is...
No, that's not it either.
Do you like - want -
Oh, forget it.
No. I can do this.
Here I go:
...
Nice weather we're having, isn't it?
Darn. Maybe I'll try again tomorrow.
A contest entry
- Red Dwarf ~ "Tongue Tied" love poems ~ PIF by Xianaria.
900 points, ended October 8, 2008, 21 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think in general?
Comments
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Cute
I like this a lot. It bespeaks of tongue-tied young love wanting to take wing, but not yet quite ready to fly. Great job. Yours in poetry,
gypsy
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Thank you for entering~
Cute, short and to the point
I like it.
Best wishes~
Tim
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That was cute, I liked it
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