murderous grays dominate
her path
searching for a light denied
golden borders
cannot save her
Author notes
10 poets
15 words
20 minutes
PROMPT IS THE PICTURE
("Trapped inside my fears" by ObscureNymph at deviant art)
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A contest entry
- quickie time ♥ by Immortal Obscurity.
400 points, ended October 6, 2008, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This piece makes me think: A gleaming path often leads into darkness.... are all our choices fated to end emptyhanded?
Good, thought provoking write, goes very well with the pic prompt.
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well done for the prompt . . congrats on the gold !!
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that was totally awesome and i think this contest rocks!
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Brought it all together- good stuff. Congrats on the gold!
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congrats on your golden chalice
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loverly. congrats
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Lovely verbiage, and full of imagery... Best of luck in the contest!
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Wonderful write... to stay on the right path, extremely difficult
very well penned, good luck to you
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awesome take.
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sad, but awesome take on the prompt,
good luck
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What a terrible feeling to be denied
of better times. I love the thought
that you put into this one! Good luck
to you and thanks a lot for sharing it
here!
Jeremy0826
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