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To My Brothers and Sisters

 

 

 

    I'm thankful for many things;

  I'm blessed more than I realize.

 

       I'm a miracle,

   a testament before your eyes.

 

  I'm well-versed,

 I've rehersed,

and I know what to say front to back.

 

I'm forgiving,

  I'm loving,

 and I'm never on the attack.

 

 But there's a problem,

inherent to all men.

 

 

 

He said I'd defy Him.

He knew I'd need forgiveness.

 

 

He said no good thing

   I could do

would reconcile

a single wrong.

 

And I'm such a lier to you...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • DolphinLass silver member
    October 19, 2008
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    Very well expressed and very interesting to read, thanks for entering