If I promise to never leave you
can I keep you forever?
If I promise to love you always
will you leave me never?
If I promise to rock your world
every night and day
Will you promise
to never send me away?
If I promise you my heart
will you promise not to break it?
Will you return my love
and to only me commit?
If I promise to stand
forever by your side
Will you promise
that I will never be denied?
If I promise to
love you till the day I die
Will you promise
to never make me cry?
If I promise to
make you my one and only
Will you never ever
leave me lonely?
If I promise to
leave you never
Can I please
keep you forever?
Author notes
To my one and only! He knows who he is
Please tell me what you think
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I love this poem. It's too bad life, love and relationships aren't this way. Just like a chain a relationship is only as strong or good as the weakest link.
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Interesting... displays the human need for unity between two souls ... loving the gentle rhythm and the rhyme doesnt appear forced at all.... loving the sentiment within this write too
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ha, this poem reminds me of my best friends boy friend...who she just broke up with
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i can really relate to this.....last verse got me....sumtin i said to my girlfriend once
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Good job!
Awsome writing!
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awe =] That was a really sweetly written piece. Wonderful write.
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Thank you so much for the wonderful comment! And thanks for reading
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This is so sweet and beautiful!! Great job Sisipoo!!
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Thanks sis! Glad you liked! Thanks for reading!
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I didnt like the part "if i promise to rock your world every night and day will you promise to never send me away"
but i didt however love the rest
It made me feel like i had lived through your words
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