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Good-Bye

The time has come once again
To relive my life of demons
Once I close my lids
They come back to get me
I toss and turn
And try to run away
But they win
And I'm left alone once more
Finally awakening from this hell
I look reality in the eyes
And wish that it wasn't real
I don't wanna continue this anymore
Tonight I say my last goodnight
When I rest my lids
I plan not to see light again
To go to a better place
So goodnight,
Sleep tight
And now is when I say
Good-bye

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  • DeathAngel24
    October 8, 2008
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    Deep

    Amazing poem. I can really relate to it. I hope you keep writing.

  • DeathAngel24
    October 8, 2008
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    Deep

    Amazing poem. I can really relate to it. I hope you keep writing.


  • kel dog
    October 7, 2008
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    kool. writen very well.


  • queen Moderators member
    October 7, 2008

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    welcome to all poetry

    Hi Evanescence

    Good poem, but if the demons are winning its time to kick their butt You have inner strength Please keep writing, reading and commenting
    Barbara
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  • HumanoidTom
    October 7, 2008

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    Brilliant

    This was extremely well said. I loved it. My favorite part was when you were talking about the demons. I can relate to this poem alot. It's amazing,

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