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Fly

Don’t dwell on the past
For the future is near
Just fly up and away
And there’s nothing to fear

In sadness and sorrow
It’s no time to grieve
Just spread out your wings,
Fly, and believe

Someone out there loves you
Believe it because it’s true
If you need to get away
They’ll be there to fly with you

No one can stop you
As you fly through the sky
Just find your own way
Let distress pass you by

Shoot strait to the top
Fly all the way there
And if something goes wrong
Just send up a prayer

You feel it in the air
Serenity and peace
Just spread your wings and fly
And let bad feelings release

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  • Shancy Fayre
    January 5
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    This is nice. It gives one a good feeling. Thank you for entering. Shancy.


  • SmartBrick
    October 11, 2008
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    what a pretty poem.Thanks for entering,and good luck.


  • queen Moderators member
    October 8, 2008

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    welcome to all poetry

    Hi cbsbecm88

    Outstanding poem your rhyming is very good it was a treat for me to read. I especially love the flying pig picture please keep writing, reading and commenting
    Barbara
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  • Dreamer42morrow
    October 6, 2008

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    Yes! I totally agree with the whole thing....I liked the "let bad feelings release" at the end...*sigh* i wish I could fly like that pig...*mariah spreads out her invisi-wings* =D

    ~Mariah!~