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my desire

 

Let my words validate

why you live.

In response to the tears you cry,

I want to be that hug you never get.

 

Hope my come in small packages,

but I am the special edition.

May I be a blessing in abundance,

for all the friendless and in need of

a new song to sing.

Grabbing my guitar, I'll strike a chord

in their sould - bringing a new hallelujah.

 

To you and all the burning that won't go away,

I have so much more that I could say.

But to me, it makes more sense if I just show it

rather than speak of such deeds.

 

My desire is to see you released from your chains.

I want to see you free.

 

 

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  • JustSimplyLissa gold member
    November 3, 2008

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    Wonderful take on the title! Your compassionate nature is there for the whole world to see. To have such open vulnerability in such a selfless manner, I must applaud you. It isn't an easy thing to do. Excellent poem!


  • IrishGypsyRose silver member
    October 7, 2008

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    Amazing

    I think this is a beautiful piece fraught with sentimentality. It shows love, caring, and sympathy for all things human. I enjoyed the read. Yours in poetry, gypsy

  • trekkergirl silver member
    October 7, 2008

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    nicely written as I knew it would be. Very interesting title that could have gone many different ways. I like your take on it tho. Good luck in the contest.


  • penman gold member
    October 6, 2008
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    Excellent

    wonderful creation for the title. So very well expressed. Best of luck in the contest.


  • trekkergirl silver member
    October 6, 2008
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    Can't wait to read your's mine is summer fling. I gotta come up with a good one for that. Should be fun.
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