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where does my heart lie
if not in your hands?
your beauty captures me
beyond the faculty
of words.
your love transcends
all feelings I've
ever known.
please return to me

to us

and remind us
of all that is wonderful,
peaceful
and true

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  • Lencio Rodrigues
    January 22
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    When we seek with all our hearts God never shuts his ears for us, you heart is the purest, and can be seen from life, yeah? I felt the same freshness of this write as I felt the day I read it the first time.

    God bless, He is always teaching us something, isnt He?

    Love and light,
    Lencio

  • Silver Sionnach
    October 26, 2008
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    You are my everything.

  • Lencio Rodrigues
    October 16, 2008

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    Just when they go away from us, do we find how our life is distressful, I truly loved the ending...please return to us.. really deep, i dont have the words to tell you how I felt reading this!

    God bless, I hope she will return..
    Love and light,
    Lencio


  • AerinAlanna
    October 6, 2008

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    She is always so beautiful...as is this poem. It makes my hope grow. She will be back, and she will write for us again.


  • LionessK silver member
    October 6, 2008

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    love.liness
    Your heart shines through in these words... as it does in each poem you write for Liadan. It is beautiful in more ways than one.
    Thank you for sharing such a gift with us all. It gives hope. Inspiration.
    and... I am so glad to see pictures of you all recently. Your family is gorgeous.



    ~Kristy


    • Dantes Inferno
      October 6, 2008

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      Thank you, Kristy. My Liadan is more beautiful than I'll ever have words and the same, I find, applies to you. Thank you again.

      - D


  • Night Hope gold member
    October 6, 2008
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    Gorgeous. Handsome, too.


  • lianonsidhe silver member
    October 6, 2008
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    So beautiful!!! Well crafted!


  • Phoenix Karkadann
    October 6, 2008
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    This is beautiful Draven, And Li is absolutely gorgeous in that picture.

    She will return.

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