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12.Shaking Hands(Done)

In the wind your voice reaches the tears
that flow into the river of my heart.

Taste the flavor you create
when your lips touch mine.

In the lullaby you drift on every note
dancing upon a stem of lavenders noon.

The world warped upon a string
telling me the sinful things you dream.

Shining diamonds craft the moon
as the sway of your body haunts the grass.

Lifting my fingers to caress the memory
of the day when our hands combined,
making the world shake...

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  • Very sweet impressions of the love and very beautiful scenario of the heart is created around the muse..well done..and great work indeed...


  • JustSimplyLissa gold member
    November 3, 2008

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    This is a truly lovely write, strong images and soft words make for a wonderful poem. Thank you for this great entry.


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    October 6, 2008

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    Wonderful poem
    Your emotions and the imagery were terrific and I really like your background
    very cool


  • trekkergirl
    October 6, 2008

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    oh I just love your background!!! And I am in this contest too. Can't wait to see what you come up with.


  • maralisa silver member
    October 6, 2008
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    aw hun a stunnigly beautiful background

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