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Star Stunned

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the stars stunned me
the clearness of my vision
the milky way mapped before my startled eyes
Cassiopeia's triple crown blazing
in that still moment
I was an ancient traveler
finding direction after weeks of cloud filled skies
There! the pole star unmistakable
pointing me foreword, home
no longer lost , adrift in fog
but star sharp symmetry now guides me
elation overrides my foolish fears
as I step boldly on
location centered and  now known

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  • tomisb
    October 6, 2008

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    We always must know where we are to be able to get where we are going. Fog or star creates its own.

    Peace & Light,
    Tom B.


    • Draig aine gold member
      October 12, 2008
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      star stunned

      I am fog bound, star stunned, and happy to be so,
      bright blessings my friend
      NamastE


    • Draig aine gold member
      October 10, 2008
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      thank you

      bright blessing

      Namaste