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Disaster date.

I had planned tonight,
wanted every thing to
be all right.
How was I to know,
it wasn't to be so.

The mood was set,
at least it would
have been had I
not hurt my neck.

You rang the bell,
I rushed like hell,
the time had gone so quick,
I had to tidy my room,
did not want you to see,
my flat like this,
and then I slipped and fell,
and still you rang the bell.

I picked my self up,
opened the door,
the way you looked,
I wanted more.
You walked, in
to my abode,
flung your coat,
on the floor.
The dress followed too,
followed by underwear,
all I could do was stare.
I had almost forgotten
my pain,you led
me to the bed,
then ouch,
as I lay beside you,
it came right back.
not only was my neck
in poor shape,worse
was yet to come
my best friend,
went on strike,
he would not get hard,
try as I might.


You asked if I didn't want you,
if only you knew.
The date that I had planned,
was never meant to be.
it was that night you left me.
Left me all alone.
Now all I have are
memories of you.
My best friend
and I see the lonely
nights through.

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