Deep inside my soul
I found an empty hole
I sat you down inside
to find that we collide
My love is yearning for you
my heart is reaching towards you
My ever~flowing wonder
pushes you down under
finding peace inside
but still longing to survive
No wonder I'm insane,
with this never-ending pain
What feelings do you capture from this peice?
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An intriguing piece...
An intriguing piece; if the "you" in this poem is Christ, then you should capitalize all occurrences of "you" so that we the readers will know that it is Him that is implied; catchy title. --Joe
PS The second stanza I found very appealing. I wrote a book of poetry called: Reaching Towards His Unbounded Glory
http://www.squidoo.com/book-isbn-1419650513
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so very touching
hey pretty catchy and works well the instrumentals 2 this song
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Deep inside my soul
what song r u talking about?????? -
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polaris by zero 7 but the timing when i said it in my head is a little of 2 the rythme of it. besides ima better musician than i am a poet =]
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