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Love Is...

Love is ...

you kissing the sides of my mouth
because you like my smile;
Then kissing the tears upon my cheeks
because you hate to see me cry.

Dancing in public when no music is playing
while drinking in the moonlight
Just you and me chasing stars 
With no one else anywhere in sight.


Love is ...

Dating you even if we had wed
Stealing glances across a table bathed in candlelight
Flirting like we just met

Loving to
be in love with you........

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  • Rebekah-Ann silver member
    October 28, 2008

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    Simple yet a picture of a deep love. A love that will stand by you till the end of time!! I like this poem because of the little things you talk about is the little things that make all the difference.

    Well done!


  • the ripple
    October 11, 2008
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    Nice poem. Really nic


  • omg-its-sara
    October 8, 2008
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    That made me smile! awesome poem!

    thanks for entering


  • Hannie
    October 8, 2008
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    i really loved this poem!!!!
    thanks so much for entering

    Good luck


  • myrataal silver member
    October 7, 2008

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    Ah!

    How you make Love forever happy! I love Love, and if two love each other like in your poem, and not only find themselves in love with Love, one can almost begin to believe in eternal Love! For this poem is about enjoyment, caring, sharing, embracing. Such is ... true love!


    Myra


    • cre8tiv-writer
      October 7, 2008
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      Hello lover of love!!! I'm glad you appreciated what I was doing here....thanks so much for your comment!!


  • lisapoet
    October 6, 2008

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    Delightful! You made me want to love again. I could sense your love throughout the poem. You had a nice flow and contemporary feel. The writer had a secure safe tone. I'll read more! Return the favor?


  • Swangrnv gold member
    October 6, 2008
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    god..

    this is so sweetly beautiful my friend, you are proving to me..YOU CAN FLATOUT WRITE!!


  • sensualbutterfly
    October 6, 2008
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    A wonderfully sweet write lil sis! I could visualize every word! Wonderful job

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