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The return

Oh my God!
Could this be true.
That my lonely days are fading at last? Could this be true that my cold nights are getting warmer in just a few hours? 
Days became weeks while weeks became months as i longed for the return of my love. I shed tears of longing and pain when my love left, but today, i'm shedding tears of joy and love. Countless nights i spent sleeping as a dollar sign with a cold blanket of loneliness over me. But today! Today is the return of my love. Returning with my other part of my life

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  • ScarsFade
    October 6, 2008

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    how sweet and simple i really liked it. I think it conveyed a true but simple point that made me feel your passion for your loved one....so wonderful...keep written....scars.