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Seasons Of Change

Winter

crystalized ice forms
hung beneath eaves of white
winter soltice gleam

Spring

purple crocus peeks
rejoice sweet sounds of rebirth
neath rhythmic rain

Summer

clover fields abuzz
morning glory trumpets dawn
frogs, venus fly trap

Fall

harvest moon shines on
nature sings crimson and gold
autumn concerto


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  • elemental angel
    October 17, 2008
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    Wonderfully written
    Bravo

  • carole21
    October 17, 2008
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    nicely penned . . like the picture as well . . congrats on the gold !!


  • HeartTangles
    October 16, 2008

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    I have to say I like the autumn haiku the best, seems to beam like the harvest moon inside my heart as I read it. Congratulations on the GOLD!


  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    October 16, 2008
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    Worthy!

    This is most definitely of Gold! Good use of a Haiku Chain! I think my fav is the way you end this with the Fall:

    harvest moon shines on
    nature sings crimson and gold
    autumn concerto

    Bravo! Besides the fact that I really love the Fall season, I'm also a musician & I love that you turned this into an 'Autumn Concerto'!


  • debilynn gold member
    October 12, 2008

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    beautiful sister! these are great haiku's and i enjoyed reading them very much. thank you for sharing your talent. keep writing poet! God bless you always


    • Sandygram
      October 14, 2008
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      God Morning Debilynn

      So nice to hear from you sis.I hope all is well with you. Always nice when you stop by. You take care. God Bless You.

      Always, Sandy


  • wingsofgold25 silver member
    October 12, 2008

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    This is realy good the changing of seasons a real magical time and you have given a perfect example.
    Good Luck in the contest.
    ED.


  • IrishGypsyRose silver member
    October 9, 2008

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    Amazing Haiku

    I think this is a beautiful piece. I love haiku and you played it like a fine tuned instrument. Great write. Best of luck in the contest. Yours in poetry, gypsy


    • Sandygram
      October 14, 2008
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      God Morning Gypsy

      Your comment was lovely and most appreciated. You take care.

      Bless You,
      Sandy

  • mcheadle
    October 6, 2008
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    That has everything is it's place

    Very good job...mac

    • Sandygram
      October 7, 2008
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      Lovely Comment

      Good Morning Mac. Thank you for reading. I always enjoy your visits when you drop by. Hugs and Smiles.

      Bless You,
      Sandy


  • Puppydog gold member
    October 6, 2008

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    SO BEAUTIFUL!!!!!

    To me there is nothing even close in comparrison to the beauty of the changing seasons. 's

    • Sandygram
      October 7, 2008
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      Wonderful Comment

      Hello Kevin. Thank you for reading and leaving this lovely comment. Blessings to you my friend.

      Take care,
      Sandy

  • SoulWhispher
    October 6, 2008
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    Well Done

    I really enjoyed this write, twas great, blessings John

    • Sandygram
      October 6, 2008
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      Nice Comment

      Thank you for reading my poem John. Nice to read your comments. You take care. Hugs and Smiles

      Bless You,
      Sandy

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