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Faithful Friends


The metallic melodies
Were always just background music

But then you walked away;
Abandoned me to silence

Wind chimes provide
The loudest sounds now -
They are my only faithful friends.
 
 

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30 words, prompt was 'wind chimes'

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  • chilali
    October 16, 2008

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    Beautiful! Loved the words and the flow throughout the entire poem! Great work Kyle Congrats on the trophy.


  • Captain Jenny
    October 8, 2008
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    Beautiful. Love every word. Congrats on the trophy ^^

    ~lae


  • Hannah01121
    October 7, 2008

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    omg this is an amazing poem kyle...lol hopefully i fall under the faithful friend category...love ya


  • Beauty Of Silence
    October 7, 2008

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    wow. this is a great piece. it was short, and very deep. beautiful work, keep penning!


  • November-Dani
    October 7, 2008
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    Sad and beautiful. Well done!
    Dani.


  • Symphony
    October 7, 2008

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    Aaw, this was beautiful Kyle; I'm sure most people wouldn't have taken this take on the prompt, and it's always good to come up with something unusual and unique. Nice job, and congrats on the trophy


    • KyleBerg gold member
      October 7, 2008
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      Unusual and Unique are my middle names.
      (not really)
      Thanks for reading and I'm glad you liked it

  • panic-tiger-is-here
    October 6, 2008

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    Thats really nice, short and slightly sad but still brilliant. Good Work


  • going nowhere
    October 6, 2008
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    beautifully written... so sad, though. thank you


    • KyleBerg gold member
      October 6, 2008
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      thanks for reading, thanks for the comment and thank you for the HM very much appreciated


  • Painted Nails
    October 6, 2008
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    I really like this poem. It expresses a lot of emotion!


    • KyleBerg gold member
      October 6, 2008
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      Im glad you liked it and could feel the emotion.
      Thank you!


  • Metalchica
    October 6, 2008
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    that was really great keep up the good work

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