The story of my life,
begins and ends with you.
Each paragraph, each line,
was etched before I knew.
Each chapter speaks your name,
the words I know are true.
My life completely changed,
the moment I found you.
The story of my life,
began when you walked by.
I'll never be the same,
you gave me wings to fly.
Some stories have to end,
when the final page is turned.
But mine will linger on,
while the fire and passions burn.
So the story of my life,
began and ends with you.
Feelings old as time,
fairytale come true.
A contest entry
- Prewrites by Sandra R Reynolds.
400 points, ended November 2, 2008, 14 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Comments
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awww this is really sweet.
For a second there you had me beliving that this thing called love existed
Well done cupcake!
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Aw bless you I am sure it does somwhere...thanks for your lovely comment...mal
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hahah
yes im sure ill find it sun baking under the everlasting summer sun, next to the money growing tree ...
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very powerful indeed... good luck
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oh i nearly forgot to comment here as i checked it cost it said 24 lines
a good poem. i like the feelings being as old as time.
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Beautiful and simple. Great rhyme flow and love.
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I can't tell you too many times how impressed I am at your use of rhyme and perfect meter, to say nothing of how just plain beautiful this love song is! Such simple lines, such intense feelings. I will likely read this to my beloved, since it conveys how I feel, as well, Thank you so much for sharing!
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A love story..."Feelings old as time, fairytale come true". And such a shame.."Some stories have to end"
A great write!!
Love the background choice.
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such love and affection Mal
brill poem x hugs
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Power and Passion!
Extremely well penned my friend, I love stories, this is a story, the power is in the simplicity in which you have addressed your subject; love, always packs a knockout punch...it SPEAKS, does not waver or have second thoughts, and therein lies the passion, the two are inseparable...
loved this to pieces
John
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