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Wishing

Wishing you was here to hold me tight
Wishing you was here to tell me you love me
Wishing you was here to kiss me
Wishing you was here to lay next to me
Only if wishes could come true
That is what I wished for
Wishing you was here 

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To my baby

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  • The Hardest Goodbye
    October 7, 2008

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    Very Nice Poem :]
    I'm in the same situation you are.
    Long Distance Thing.
    It sucks. But it will be worth it if your really & truly in love.

    Awesome Write


  • Juggalo-King
    October 7, 2008
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    i love it and i wish i was there to baby and you need to fix *hat* to what