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I've Been Here All Along


My heart thunders a rapid tattoo
aching with longing, I'm waiting for you
With arms of comfort and love spread wide
yearning with bated breath for you to step inside

I have been hear all along
my heart wide open, with melodic song
You will finally be in my loving embrace
the years of waiting disappear with naught a trace

I dream of you each night
my soul burns a candle that's bright
I eagerly await the sound of a car
the days over of wishing on that brilliant star

I have been here all along
my heart opens wider, here you belong
I hear the sound of a slamming door
forever love, I will not wait a breath more

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    October 6, 2008

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    Such a beautiful write of love...and a wonderful dedication to the one you love...I wish you nothing but happiness and a beautiful life together...
    Best to you!
    mystic


  • M. Pinnell
    October 6, 2008
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    Breathtaking!

    I Love this one. It epitemizes your angst and your love. Well done Gypsy!


  • princessleejwctlvr2
    October 6, 2008
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    Aww sis!! This is so amazing and beautiful you are such a wonderful amazing writer!! This is so very very beautiful and I know it came from your heart!! I can tell that you put a lot of thought into this!!! You gave excellent description and portrayed this piece well!! Its incredible!! I love it!!