silky whispers
quiver harmoniously
in a gentle breeze
A contest entry
- windchimes by going nowhere.
600 points, ended October 6, 2008, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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What a great description of wind chimes, excellent use of adjectives-after all you are The Adjective Queen
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What a beautiful poem. As always you have the perfect words to tell the story. Congratulations on your trophy. I always enjoy clicking into anything you've written. I know it will be enjoyable.
Joan
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simply soft and beautiful....like you
congratulations on the cup...well deserved sam
mal
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A beautiful write and skillfully crafted haiku. Very good word choice. Lovely depth of feeling. Well penned and much enjoyed. Best wishes in the contest.
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so well done with so little words. this makes me smile at its simplicity. thank you
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