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The joy of Love

Not to the left

Not to the right

Keep to the middle

And you`ll be allright

Balance is the name

Of a job well done

Done by your hands 

Done by your heart

What ever you do

Do it with love

Offer to her temple

With a heart, that`s light

Never supress her

For she will fight

Treat her with kindness

Treat her with love

Give her her dues

She will give back more

Keep her so near

So she can breath

Keep her so far

To feel the need

Then you shall know

A job well done

Is done with ballance

Mingled with love.

 

 

 

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  • campanaro silver member
    March 7

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    Nick,

    This speaks volumes..
    -of truth.
    You said it best.
    Wonderful write my friend
    Love Peace
    campanaro


  • jackreed3 gold member
    January 29
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    A great Poem ... Nice Flow... JackReed3


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    October 9, 2008

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    humm..I agree with you my friend..your logic and your point of view is well taken...and well thought as well..Indeed an inspiring image you brought here..well done..

  • duhhitsyasmine
    October 6, 2008
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    nice


  • Jalalbad gold member
    October 6, 2008
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    very good write Nick. I wish you luck in this contest.

  • Cwm
    October 6, 2008

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    hmmm... I will use some of your suggestions... because love is a tricky thing... but like the song says, "It's all in the game in love" Good luck in contest.


    • Angelo di Luce gold member
      October 6, 2008
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      Thank you for your kind comment
      I think one can never win when in love
      Is equaly a winner and a looser
      No matter how we try to hide the truth, deep down we know
      Blessings

      • Cwm
        October 6, 2008
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        Very much so it's a struggle and also a CONCEPT once you think about it, we'll put on this earth and we don't know why really... lol... but we all want to be wanted... many will lie and say they don't.. but it's a need to be wanted.


        • Angelo di Luce gold member
          October 6, 2008
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          A Greek philosopher said
          Upon this Earth there two Powers
          One is Nikon, wich means hate and Filotis wich means love or friendlyness
          One divides, and the other Unites
          According to this one can understand the reason why it is so
          And then come back to square one and start again as to why!

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