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Gentle Reminder

 


Fairies wisp
through haunting
breeze,

gently ringing
chimes
blanketing
me in calmness,

 

reminder to us all

to believe

 

 

 

 

      ~another Angel 

        was graced with wings.

 

 

 

 

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  • Manoj Sanyal
    October 16, 2008
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    well expressed...
    Good luck,


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    October 12, 2008

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    Oh so beautifully enchanting ~ congrats on your shiny trophy; should have been gold though ~ this is just breathtaking... x Love always, Gypsy-Princess... x


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    October 9, 2008

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    I LOVE THE WIND CHIMES REMINDS ME OF THE SAYING, EVERY TIME A BELL RING AN ANGELS GETS THERE WINGS.
    ABSOULELY LOVELY VISION YOU HAVE CREATED
    GOD BLESS YOU MY FRIEND...


  • Nicada silver member
    October 8, 2008

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    A beautiful poem and it relates so well to the prompt. So lovely in so few words here. Great job, and thanks much for entering my contest. Blessings, Patty


  • Malabu
    October 7, 2008
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    beautiful...and gorgeous


  • januaryrain gold member
    October 6, 2008

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    Beautiful, I love the sound of windchimes, just bought myself a beautiful wood one for my trailer, when I hear it for the first time next year, I will think of this poem.
    Wonderful


  • going nowhere
    October 6, 2008

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    this reminds me of it's a wonderful life... the ringing of the bell... another angel gets its wings
    i love this... very light and almost picking me up in its breeze. thank you.


  • Maxboy gold member
    October 6, 2008

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    Beautiful, and the whisp of wind you felt was the flutter of their wings.

    Wonderful
    Love
    Don


  • Puppydog gold member
    October 6, 2008

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    LOVELY!!!! FILLED WITH BEAUTY!!!!

    This lovely write brings to my mind the last scene from ITS A WONDERFUL LIFE 's Where the bell on the Christmas tree rings and he knows clarence got his wings. 's


  • maralisa silver member
    October 6, 2008

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    aw sis this is just brilliant we must all beleive within ourselves to grow good luck in the contest sis take care maralisa


  • delightfulmess silver member
    October 6, 2008

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    Awe... this is so precious.
    love this. I am a believer that the breezes carry the unseen. This is beautiful.


    Delila


  • Riamh
    October 6, 2008

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    This is a lovely poem, a refreshing read. Best of luck in the contest.

    Slayer


  • IrishGypsyRose silver member
    October 6, 2008

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    Awe Inspiring!!!

    God love you woman. This is so beautiful and flowing. I think to go up against you in a contest would be my biggest challenge...I believe you drip poetry from your very soul into a tube fed pen nub. Great write. Love, mandie


  • charcoal
    October 6, 2008
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    is beautiful wow.

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