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Perfectly capturing a moment in time,

When sorrow flees for happiness,

And no one can interrupt.

A photo that will last a lifetime,

A proof there was happier times,

And that I once was young and free.

Maybe a day in my future,

I will look back at that day,

And fall a sleep with a smile.

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2. Write a poem of 50 words or less describing what you like about your avatar. <- I think I wrote over the limit, hope its okay?

Photo is of me, my best friend took this and I can't remember what it was I thought of when she took it, but it sure must have been something hot

A contest entry

Show Off Your Avatar! by Kari. 950 points, ended October 18, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

Please tell me what you think

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Sweet Impatience
October 31, 2008

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I love this picture of you. You've got such a beautiful smile and yes happier times will come again. and you'll fall asleep every night with a smile.

I love you
mommy
Kari
October 18, 2008

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Yes, it's fine that you wrote over. You did very well Thank you Nice pic!
- Meroza
  October 18, 2008
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  Yay, I am glad you liked it!
ea
October 6, 2008

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That is a really cute picture I love how your tongue curls up. I know how significant this must be for you to state that you know there were happier times, in light of the recent death of your stepfather. And I know you will be smiling again...
- Meroza
  October 7, 2008
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  Yay, finally someone who understood and didn't mistake me for a sad person
  
  Aye, I'm smiling every day, at least at school...