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Sylvia Plath

I want to be the only
one in pain
I want to be the first
to find that escape

I want to be Sylvia Plath,
broken smile and ashes in my hair

I need to be the only one.
the only poet
the only broken heart
the only survival story.

I want to be Sylvia Plath,
broken smile
and ashes
in my hair

Author notes

inspired by Sylvia Plath by Ryan Adams, and also my current mood.

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