Clouds wispy, soft and telling,
subdued night gently quelling.
With heavy heart I embrace,
upon moon appears your face.
Relected from a distance far,
mind wanders to where you are.
If only I could make you see,
this love deep inside of me.
Drives me crazy everyday,
why you up and went away.
Nothing we can't work through,
if you love me and I love you.
If there with you I would show,
within my arms you would know.
By tender kisses on this night,
everything would seem so right.
How can I reach you far away,
show what my heart wants to say.
Think of you whole day through,
tonight I sit here missing you.
Author notes
Based on the pronmp, song Far Away by Nickleback
http://www.imeem.com/rockvideos/video/0QcQXsFX/nickelback_far_away_music_video/
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A contest entry
- Far Away. by Poetryintheblood.
450 points, ended October 9, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Thank you for your most beautifully expressed write, good luck in my contest, Josie
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Wow
This should be a gold winner, the thoughts contained and the emotions felt reach out to the heart, the flow and the rthym were oustanding, you are amazing, blessings John
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Wonderful Comment
Thank you so much for this lovely comment. You are too kind
I appreciate your thoughtful opinion. Have a nice day.
Bless You John,
Sandy 
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Beautiful thoughts and words nicely rhymed.
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Nice Comment
Thank you for the nice coment. I appreciate you stopping by.
Take care,
Sandy
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