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Love's Waltz

Within the realms of lusty endeavors
You found me...
Wrapped in your embrace
Shielded from heartless intentions
Your gaze steadied my stance
And the waltz began...

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  • Yummy
    October 14, 2008
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    GOOD JUST CAUSE ITS YOU!!


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    October 9, 2008

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    The immagery is crafted by the depth of your own soul bringing the beauty of life in it..the impact of the poem just magical..thanks for your entry..Goodluck..


  • lefthanded
    October 7, 2008

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    The Dance!

    Have you heard Dave Koz's collabo with Luther Vandross called THE DANCE? That is what comes to me when i read this piece. Good work. I guess somebody is getting some Sexual Healing from the sound of this. Hahaha!


  • and so on
    October 7, 2008
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    i love small poems and this i like a lot it almost feels like a waltz and good use of words.


  • NyteShade
    October 7, 2008
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    Awww this is beautiful blue blue


  • SeptemberFaith
    October 6, 2008

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    I love thinking of love as a dance.. especially as a waltz. The waltz is so beautiful and fluid... you paint a nice picture of what love can be.

    Good luck with this contest,
    Criss


  • Gentle Chaos Lion
    October 6, 2008

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    The realm of lust is a dangerous place, but what a wonderful fate it is to be shielded from "heartless intentions". Love in a gaze brings such confidence that the waltz of love must dance on across the ballroom of life. Well done.

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