I am a man with no fear.
But the last punch hit me so hard i couldnt hear.
This is the biggest fight of the year.
Im gettin hit with rights and lefts.
People are wavin money and makin bets.
My eye is swelled and hurts like hell.
If only the referee would call for the bell.
I swing hard with a right.
knockout, i just ended the fight.
The referee waves me hand in the air.
My opponent seem like he didnt care, but he did because he hit me in the jaw.
The sit stool is lying on the floor, i fall
Im a wreck, i hit the stool and crack my neck.
Its amazion how a fight can change peoples lives i now have to live mine PARALIZED.
A contest entry
- inspire me........how far have you come? by doesne1care.
465 points, ended October 24, 2008, 28 entries
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bunchnbunch
this really got to me it is so true. people shouldn't get into fights. i hope this is not true. -
gosh, very powerfull, yes, any type of pysical or emotional things can leavde people paralized physically or mentally.
a really really strong piece, im sorry you had to go throught htis, but it doesnt help me saying that i know.
thankkyous for entergin xx -
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Wow, is this for real?
But yes... fights can leave so many marks, and so many kinds of them, too. I can only hope this is fiction 
Best wishes 
~Diana -
Very interesting. You spell things the way you say??? O.o Lol. Was this real?
Well, it was interesting, and the format was odd for that rhyme sceme. But cool. ^-^
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