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greeting fall triolet

autumn steals the summer heat
winds that chill bring only memories
reds and gold promise we'll meet
autumn steals the summer heat
leaves die slowly as winter they greet
soon barren trees will give testimonies
autumn steals the summer heat
winds that chill bring only memories

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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    October 11, 2008

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    First, the color of font on this does not work, forcing me to highlight the text to be able to read it.
    Your rds are good, though short, but gets the point across.

    Thank you for entering and good luck
    Storm

    • carole21
      October 14, 2008
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      thanks

      I see nothing wrong with the color of this font since it is dark and easy to read (charcoal grey) . . took the poem out since you must have some other problem with it . .