A commission ordered: "capture a scene";
To portray the feline trapped between
This world and the next, slow to leave,
She knows her owner's still prone to grieve.
I see her by the gates, in my minds eye,
Waiting patiently until the day that I die.
When that day comes, there we will meet,
Together to enter upon Heaven's golden street.
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2. Write a poem of 50 words or less describing what you like about your avatar.
I know I went slightly over the word limit. Apologies. 
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This was very creative...thank you
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Wow....I can see the bond between owner and cat, and the cat patiently waiting for it's owner on the other side, so that they may enter the gates together, never to be seperated again! Terrific!
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thank you for your comment i do believe she is waiting for me ...
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Very good take on the picture.
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thank you for your comment
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First place. For sure. Excellent. You continue to amaze me. Excellent write. Sad but at the same time beautiful. Your vocabulary is quite extensive. I noticed from reading more of your work. I really enjoy reading your work. Keep it up.
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thank you Josh im always alittle worried that i use the same old words/ideas/cliches in every poem, doesn't every poet
hope you're keeping well!
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