It is you who is the Goddess
within all my dreams
the one who makes my heart skip a beat
and the voice I listen to
over and over again.
You are the beauty of the sun in my mornings
and the magic of the moonlight in my nights
you are the salty breeze of the ocean
and the perfume of all flowers.
It is you, who speaks to my soul
with a deep adoration
for you are my destiny
and the Goddess of my all.
I aprreciate if you make a comment/applause
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This is an amazing write! Very deep with emotions... I have someone who means all this and more to me... So it really touches me....
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very good! i'm glad i stopped by. i haven't read any of your poems in so long, and i needed the uplift. you're a very talented person. keep writing.
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ooooo J'aime beacoup!!! BRAVO!!!
je suis tres tres hereuse. keep writing my friend
Red red
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Ahh! A short poem with strong emotions! I love such poetry, short yet with so much meaning! The beauty of such poetry is that it immediately grabs the readers attention and once he/she starts reading he/she cannot move on until the very end has been reached, left longing for more!
Excellent work!
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A very beautiful poem. Anyone would be lucky to stop by and see the absolute devotion and love. It makes me happy that you have found someone to love and be happy with.
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Fantastic poem. This is so different than your normal writes. It was just so enthralling and made me feel so happy for you. What a great poem with excellent flow and beautiful rhythm. Go for it, Soul. You are!
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GREAT JOB LOVE
my o my i love it the poem reads what you are felling and what you want to tell that person
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wow
This really is beautiful. You did a great job. I like your work when its a more uplifting write, compared to some of your darker stuff. All thoguh that's good stuff too. nice job
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Very pretty work guys.
Be Well
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This turned out beautifully Rehan, and I am so glad I could help you, looking forward to writing with you again
Josie
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