Aqua visions dance
while slumber is my friend
and reality takes scheduled stop.
Thousand graphics fusing,
I detect a fight
from this jigsawed perplexity
and sweet turns sour.
Heart-held secrets
whispered along crystallized
craving seas;
almost snatching
but tonight, innocence
remains in power
as
eyes become exposed,
adopt realness once more.
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Thanks my kindred spirit Kat for passing on this picture, I am very pleased it woke my muse 
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Beautiful imagery and a stunning write!
All the very best to you
Love
Alyzeh
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fantastic imagery
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I don't know where the picture is but this is another brilliant creation of poetry you've written here. You are amazing.
How is your pregnancy coming? Are we having a baby girl or boy?? I'm so excited for you and Matt. I've been reminecing when my babies were born. Oh it is such a sweet precious time. Oh and I loved being pregnant and I hope you are too. I've missed you my darling niece.
Wishing You Many Blessings,
Much Love Always,
Your Aunty,
Kelle Marie
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Oh Cindy, you have not missed one poetic stroke dear as this is a most pensive write with strong diction.
With much love,
mj.
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thanks Dad
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Yer welcome little momma.
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Well I can't see the pic sis but damn I love the write!!!! Ahh to adopt realness... fade from the fantasy.. hard to do sometimes but necessary!
♥
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well thats screwy and now im not gold lol, sorry, but yeah who cares the words rock enough hehehe, THANKS SiS
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Ah I do like it.
Nicely flow.
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ahhh my kindred spirit you've penned a beautiful poem. my favorite stanzas are the first and the 3rd. I see that your muse is alive and kicking. it was just sleeping for a bit. the imagery is outstanding and I love this so much..
I lubbers you
kat
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hehe yay she came alive, well i hope she stays alive.. i tried writing after that and nothing , but who cares, I love this write, and that you gave me such an inspiring pic
Lubbers u too darls
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you want me to send you more prompts
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dont stress bout it now
i dont feel like writing anymore.. im happy this came out and all but i had to push so hard.. im so over it
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I love the picture and the poem just brings it to life. Your originality in this is really good and quite frankly amazing.
Love,
Amera♥
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Thank you my kind one. Whether good or not ( and I think it is too hehe ) , I was relieved something came out of me, have been so quiet lol
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beautiful words to go with a lovely picture Cinn
Juls
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A clear emtions in words..
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Lol I have used that pic before but it kind of reminds me of Children of the damned lol...but you paint a beautiful portrait here Cuz. Love, C
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i dont find that odd lol
thanks Cuz
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that picture is just adorable. truly the child looks as though they know a magical secret which they are willing to share if you do not spoil it - and you captured this thought beautifully in the poem, well done and thanks for sharing it
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Thank you for your thoughts
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