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Emptiness





Difficult breathing
decoration of skeletons
mollusks, pebbles,
wind blowing between hands
as crystal but translucent,
poems sad, ballads; pure ceramics.















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PROMPT: translucent

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  • etoile
    October 8, 2008

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    this was a great take on the prompt. i loved the last 3 lines, the imagery was fantastic throughout the poem. it was great.

    thanks for entering and goodluck