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Illumination

Moonlit nights
intoxicate the mind
with dreams
of exotic fantasies,
brilliant streams of colour
shower the land
with translucent magnificence

A contest entry

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  • etoile
    October 8, 2008

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    the imagery in this was fantastically written. i liked your take on the prompt as well, nicely done. the last few lines were my favourite

    thanks for entering and goodluck


  • chilali
    October 6, 2008

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    Short and lovely! That is really all I have to say. GREAT work!!!