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The Swing

Thank you Daddy for my swing
Hanging here in this grove of trees
The beauty of the fall shines through
I hear the buzzing of the bees

It's so cool here in this grove
A carpet of leaves beneath my feet
I can swing so very high
Greet the birds with a tweet

Oh! To be a kid again

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Credit artist: http://kayceeus.deviantart.com/art/Nostalgia-99869439



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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    October 7, 2008

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    Ohh to be a kid again for sure!!! A lovely uplifting take on the prompt!