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Night walker





And from the sleeping orchid
adrift through open hands
comes the star-vestured twilight
and the pale moths
that weave my secret across aisles of perfume

 

 

 

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Prompt: midnight rendezvous

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  • Errant Panther gold member
    October 17, 2008

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    very vivd dream like scene plays out in my mind while I read this, very creative use of the prompt, bravo.


  • sheltered
    October 6, 2008
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    BAM

    nice images
    i want to know the secret... or do i?