My Mother always said "These things are sent to try us"
When I was so much younger I did not understand
What did she mean by these words? I didn't really fuss
Now that I'm so much older I feel her guiding hand
Many things have come my way I found it hard to cope
Dreams shattered, relationships ended, abused and used
Became a Mother to troubled child...needed hope
Battered,degraded and bruised at his hand was abused
With many things I've dealt but somehow I came through it
Lost ability to work, depression and much more
Thinking back to what Mum said...the pieces seem to fit
I'm proud that she's my Mum...her words I didn't ignore
In a list
A contest entry
- ".....Said" by DolphinLass.
600 points, ended October 19, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Very nicely worded and full of love and emotion and I am glad you are a surviver, like me, although I was never battered my life at times has been bad too, and I am glad you didn't ignore your Mums wise words, thanks for entering.
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Excellent write!!! Toching and very well written!
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Thank you so much!
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awesome write
Hi Julie
A wonderful write you have penned.I remember my mothers words, and how she so right in many things.I only wish she was still here with me so I could tell her how much I appreciate her wisdom.You are very lucky to still have your beautiful mum.sounds like you have had some rough patches in your life as well,I too am fighting the demons of depression, now I know how my poor mum felt.I wish you all the best in the contest.
Much love and happiness to you Julie.
Anne.
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Thank you so much!
Yes I am VERY blessed to still have my Mum
I'm sure that your Mum is watching over you still. Thanks for taking the time to read this one. I appreciate your comment and happy 
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Take care 
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Yes, these few words certainly are not taken into account until we are old enough to see the wisdom behind them. Each generation learns this lesson, and pass it on. I myself saw the same. A wonderful poem with a great deal of sentiment involved. The flow and rhythm perfect, each verse leading smoothly to the next. Good luck
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Thank you so very much for your comment and applause I appreciate it greatly and thank you for your wishes of luck
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The old saying 'Mother Knows best" is sometimes proven to be true. Mothers have been there before us and experience is a great teacher. A great tribute to all Mums everywhere.Well done and good luck in the contest.
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Thank you so much!
I appreciate you taking the time to read my poem Thankfully I still have my Mum and Dad. My Dad will will be 82 this month and my Mum will be 74.
Thanks very much for your comment and applause
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A wonderful tribute to moms all over the world. The older we get the smarter they get. wonderful job shows you usual spunk. best of luck to you in your contest and in life, Boog
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Thanks Boog Isn't it funny when you grow up and become a Mother or Father, you suddenly realise that your parents where actually right
As they say...you can't put an old head on young shoulders
Thanks for your comment and applause
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This one is really cute. I can also remember many of the saying my Mom and Grandmother always said to me. And of course there is always the dreaded "Mother's Curse". ..Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
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My father's favorite yell was "You're going to die in bed!" if we didn't get right up in the morning... I always thought at the time that that's where I'd prefer to die -- now I realize he meant we needed to get up and DO something with our day -- sometimes the real meanings of our elders' advice takes a long time to come through. I am glad your mother's advice gave you something to hold onto, and that you are victorious enough to DO something and to write so well! I can't say reading this made me happy, but I am glad I did. Do keep writing!
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I appreciate you taking the time to read my poem Thanks so much for your comment and happy s
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yes absolutely,, my fathers response to any difficult requests , was 'ask your mother',, from behind his newspaper. the things our parents say yes x
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Yep...my Dad used to say that as well Thanks for your comment and happy s I appreciate you taking the time to read my poem
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they are our greatest teachers, amazing what and how we remember the certain things our parents have said or taught us...
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Thanks so much I apprecaite your comment and happy s
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What can I say but Well Done...ya mum is a Gem and soooo are you. Nothing is gonna beat ya babe
Cuz
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A profound message within this composition--It is tinged with a bit of understandable sorrow and despair, but concludes with the uplifting thoughts of comprehension and appreciation.
Very well Written & Flawless flow of the unforced rhyming verse.
Well Done & Best of Luck in the contest!
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Thank You
I appreciate you taking the time to read my poem Your comment and applause are greatly appreciated
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Yes hun your have done it very tough, but you are certainly one of the most precious people I know, with such a big heart!
All the best with this wonderful piece.
Gaylene
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Thank you
I'm glad you liked this poem and I truly appreciate your thoughtful comment. You are precious to me as well and am sooooooooo happy that we have met Thank you also for the happy s
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