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waiting under streetlights.


grey skies
and flickering lights

painted reds
among street jazz

and busy headlights
amongst car tunes

settle in my soul
and warm me deep inside.

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  • transit
    November 4
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    ooo

    This poem had beautiful imagery and it was exciting and made me want to go there and take in the sights and sounds of the place too.

    Short yet to the point with good imagery. keep writing

    loveees,
    transit~


  • Miss Faith
    October 6
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    I love it baby!